If you would, take a moment to vote on one of the following label designs. Since the beginning of this winery blog I’ve been using it as a forum for gathering feedback from you so I figured I’d take this opportunity to continue the tradition.
We are split internally yet again on extremely subjective matters of design, so your input will go a long way toward helping me finalize this project. The label images are below and at the end of the post is a poll you can use to cast your vote. And please leave comments!
Label # 23
(there are really only 4 labels, but I’ve randomized the numbering for you digit partisans who always seem to prefer the number One.
Label 76
Label 32
Label 21
Thanks for your feedback!
Alex
4 years ago
I tried to vote for Label 21 but I don’t know if the voting system worked. So here’s my vote.
A few comments:
I like the simpler gray lines of 76 and 21. I think 23 and 32 look too much like the calligraphic fog effect of the Sea Smoke label. I also like shifting the vintage up toward the winery name and away from the text at the bottom; having the date down below makes the label visually bottom-heavy. Also, the date is too close to the “Russian River Valley” text in 23 and 32. Finally, I like putting the bottle size centered on its own line below the alcohol content. It’s a much less cluttered look; each text element is visually distinct, but there’s a coherence to the label as a whole this way.
So yeah, 21. I prefer the tan color scheme to the gray overall, which is why 76 lost out. The solid border differentiation of 76 also put me off a bit; the blended color looks better to me.
Josh
4 years ago
Alex,
It looks like your vote counted. Thanks for the detailed feedback!
johng
4 years ago
How about a “none of the above” option? Too much meaningless squiggle stuff above and below the brand in all of them, but especially in 23 and 32.
Josh
4 years ago
No can do on that one johng. The squiggles were already decided upon here.
But thanks for the comment.
Alex
4 years ago
Sounds like a vote for 21 to me…*)
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porky
4 years ago
Hi! I found you via TWoP, and I cast my vote for my favorite label (#23, since you asked. I like the more intricate ‘squiggles’ though I would prefer if they were more symmetrical, though I do like the color and bordering on #76 as well)… Any chance we can get those updates now? Thanks!
Josh
4 years ago
porky,
You didn’t leave your email address! Email me.
Joel
4 years ago
#21 clearly! Too many squiggles detracts from your brand (Capozzi) because it gets confusing between the squiggles and the letter.
BTW: Check the other link here and just cracked up when I saw your wife was on “Sorority Life” on MTV. That show used to crack me up (my wife thought I was a freak). Don’t remember the “Make it a double sweetie” line.
Tom Wark
4 years ago
Keep the logo clean…it’s very nice. Keep the vintage date off he logo. Like the darker Tan.
Josh
4 years ago
Joel,
If only everyone were like you. I’m sure Candace would love for “make it a double sweetie” to be shot execution style and thrown in a river.
But as a loving, compassionate husband I could never allow that to happen.
Nate
4 years ago
Label 21 print layout with the 32 darker gradient all the way, Daddio. Looks Sweet. Can’t wait to taste it. Peace.
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Alder Yarrow
4 years ago
23. Keep it simple !!! That’s a cardinal rule of design.